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ETHOS I built credibility by talking about my prior experiences with my topic, and by showing empathy by not saying it is the individuals fault completely but they make the final choices. It is also the food industry and the governments fault. I cited and quoted my sources properly. I introduced who they were someContinue reading “Essay 3 Self-Evaluation”

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Diego Miranda Janel Spencer WRT101S 12157 Nov. 26, 2019 Fighting Obesity Obesity and the related diseases are one of the leading causes of deaths in the United States. Obesity has many definitions but an easy one to remember is an excess of body fat that can cause health problems. According to Honor Whiteman of MedicalContinue reading “Essay 3 Final Draft”

1 overly sentimental appeal- they start off with abortion is murder already putting too much emotion into their argument 2 overly sentimental appeal- they put too much emotion into their argument saying it is murder 3 faulty casualty- they are saying based on their one experience the result is clear 4 straw man- nobody wasContinue reading “In Class Writing 12/5/19”

scare tactics- exploits natural fear, makes disasters seem more likely to occur either or- make the reader think there is only an either or answer and no other option slippery slope- one small thing will lead to a snow ball effect overly sentiment appeal- an appeal is based on excessive emotion bandwagon- argument must beContinue reading “Fallacies”

Claim : There are many health problems related to obesity and being overweight. Claim: Obesity increases medical cost annually. Claim: Childhood obesity is also on the rise. Claim: Obesity affects almost everyone. Claim: Since obesity is such a complex problem, it requires a complex solution. Solution: The solution for obesity requires the individual, the government,Continue reading “In Class Writing 12/3/19”

Diego Miranda Janel Spencer WRT101S 12157 Nov. 26, 2019 Fighting Obesity Obesity and the related diseases are one of the leading causes of deaths in the United States. Obesity has many definitions but an easy one to remember is an excess of bodyfat that can cause health problems. According to Honor Whiteman of Medical NewsContinue reading “Essay 3 Draft 2”

dependent clause: group of words that can’t stand alone, relies on another clause to complete its meaning Essay 2 Example: “So that you’re not holding on to unsolved or confusing feelings.” This is a sentence fragment and can’t stand alone. comma: indicating a pause, also used to separate items in a list Essay 1 Example:Continue reading “In Class Writing 11/26/19”

I agree with immigration because it is the natural cycle of people. I also agree that some immigrants are good for society because they fill job gaps. I disagree with immigrants because an excess of immigrants can be negative on society. If you have an excess of people their wont be enough jobs for everyone.Continue reading “In Class Writing 11/20/19”

It was most effective to not tell them my opinion on the topic so they wouldn’t become bias and agree with me just to not argue. I mainly learned that I need to focus on the opposing side and research more of why people would be opposed to it. I basically figured out I needContinue reading “In Class Writing 11/19/19”